Monday, April 13, 2009

how do i feel about her??

When I first meet her, I saw a beautiful smile in her face,
Her eyes shine throw my heart . I feel like telling her just to take my hand and let’s run away to Neverland.I knew that this would be a special girl but it will take all my strength
So she could fall in love with me, I wont give up even if I have to fight.
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13 comments:

  1. RedCanaryApril 13, 2009 at 12:33 PM

    I like your details.
    It's too short.

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  2. TONYApril 14, 2009 at 7:35 AM

    Nice work omar i really liked your poem and esssay alot keep up the good work omar


    tony ayala

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  3. LocoApril 14, 2009 at 7:37 AM

    Nice work man sometimes i felt like it would rhyme but didnt thats ok its still a true opem that comes from the heart..

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  4. HONEyCOMBzApril 14, 2009 at 7:41 AM

    NiCE OMAR
    i WONDER WHO iS iT ABOUT??
    lOl

    -*HONEyCOMBz
    xD

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  5. kleverApril 14, 2009 at 7:43 AM

    nice job omar need to be more longer but still good

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  6. CruzApril 14, 2009 at 7:44 AM

    its good but you need to make it longer

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  7. loveableApril 14, 2009 at 7:46 AM

    nic3 work om4r i re4lly lov3 d4 poem its so romantic and sweet thats how the romantic style goes its all about love

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  8. NextCristianoRonaldoApril 14, 2009 at 7:46 AM

    nice job omar
    keep up the good work
    O=9
    E=10

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  9. ArmandoApril 14, 2009 at 7:46 AM

    damn u snaped dang that was good but make it a lil longer so it can be better

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  10. daliaApril 14, 2009 at 8:19 AM

    Nice peom omar but its to short add more to and like i told you ill help you like 1000 times and you dont listen but that would made it better =]

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  11. ErnestoApril 14, 2009 at 9:35 AM

    Nice poem omar i like your details keep up the good work!!!

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  12. micahel joeApril 14, 2009 at 9:44 AM

    oh....come from the heart peom hehehe

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  13. crystalApril 14, 2009 at 12:08 PM

    good job. omar.:)

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